
I
Among snowy cephalopods
The only moving thing
Was the blade of my cleaver.
And here's the 12th:
XII
The water is moving.
The kraken must be swimming.
There's an awful lot of bad Stevens out there. Do we do this to Pound or Williams or Stein? Well, yes--I think--Stein.
By the way, about section one ("Among twenty snowy mountains, / The only moving thing / Was the eye of the blackbird.") a fellow who goes by "Pseudo Intellectual" at the "everything2" site writes: "This is very likely a verse about necrophilia." Okay, I think I prefer the squidified version.